at first I didn't notice because I thought it was the way you spell the road's name but then i saw the map and wow that's a big typo. "Accosiated Rd." this card needs an improvement. really a bad design.
With so much going on, the design should incorporate some clear, open-space so that the reader can 'breathe.' As for the typo, it may take the reader a double look at the map to get the correct street name. Hope that doesn't dicourage the reader from finding the address.
Hmmm... Everything glows. Even the glow has a glow. The map doesn't really show a good location of the cinema. Thinking outside the box means using a different font other than what is used in the card. I've never seen a red, yellow, & green filmstrip before. Centered with no white space... Bad Times.
If you need something to do this summer, give this one a shot. Redesign the logo, or the front/back of the card, or the map. A fun challenge to keep your skills up!
at first I didn't notice because I thought it was the way you spell the road's name but then i saw the map and wow that's a big typo. "Accosiated Rd." this card needs an improvement. really a bad design.
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With so much going on, the design should incorporate some clear, open-space so that the reader can 'breathe.' As for the typo, it may take the reader a double look at the map to get the correct street name. Hope that doesn't dicourage the reader from finding the address.
ReplyDeleteHmmm... Everything glows. Even the glow has a glow. The map doesn't really show a good location of the cinema. Thinking outside the box means using a different font other than what is used in the card. I've never seen a red, yellow, & green filmstrip before. Centered with no white space... Bad Times.
ReplyDeleteIf you need something to do this summer, give this one a shot. Redesign the logo, or the front/back of the card, or the map. A fun challenge to keep your skills up!
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